Dear Jane,
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| Adler March 2013 |
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| Adler June 2013 Hope is a dangling participle grammatical error/broken rule your son has cancer hope is a comma, another breath another day more hope is a semi colon; separation between what was what may be period -One day more, Sara (Top photo taken by my sister in law Emily Utley http://emilyjanephotography.com/ ) |
Sara, your poem is beautiful and touching. I think it fits for everyone at some time or another in their life. I'm going to add that I think of hope as an exclamation mark because without hope, we would be lost. Best wishes and many prayers.
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