Wednesday, June 19, 2013

                              June 19, 2013

    Dear Jane,


Adler March 2013

 

Adler June 2013


Hope is a dangling participle
grammatical error/broken
rule
your son has cancer
hope is a comma,
another breath
another day more
hope is a semi colon;
separation between what
was
what may be
period


-One day more,

Sara



(Top photo taken by my sister in law Emily Utley http://emilyjanephotography.com/ )


 
 
 


 

 

 

                   

1 comment:

  1. Sara, your poem is beautiful and touching. I think it fits for everyone at some time or another in their life. I'm going to add that I think of hope as an exclamation mark because without hope, we would be lost. Best wishes and many prayers.

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